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Remember

I remember                        sensing you 
         were                near.           I re-             member   
  your presence               was    so clear.            I remember 
the impact                          your life                    made. And i 
knew my                                life                               forever  
changed.                         I remember                   sensing you 
were gone.                      I remember                  the loss i felt                      so strong.                        I remember                     the impact 
your life                               made.                         Even now, 
  my life is                             not                           the same.                          
    I remember.                                                 I wont ever                                                    
       forget.                                                    The stamp 
          of your life                                             Forever 
             imbedded                                   in my heart,
                 So please                              remember
                      Who you                       are to me.
                           And that                    i wait 
                                 for you         to one 
                                        day        re-
                                           member
                                               too.

Copyright © Mona Ebel | Year Posted 2023

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Christina Bowring Date: 10/13/2023 8:49:00 AM This is a very well constructed poem Mona. Very effective! Great expressions of love and what it means to you. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you. :) Login to Reply Mona Ebel Date: 10/15/2023 7:37:00 AM Good morning, Christina. Thank you very much. I appreciate your feedback. I hope we interact more often and encourage one another, challenge one another as we grow in poetry. Blessings to you in return.

Sotto Poet Date: 9/29/2023 6:13:00 PM The Shape format of your poem, Mona, is what first drew my attention to it. It is quite wonderful how you can use words to evoke feelings of love and desire in a reader. Reading your poetry was a wonderful experience for me! Login to Reply Mona Ebel Date: 10/15/2023 7:43:00 AM Thank you for the beautiful response. I reread my poetry, and like them well enough, but when I read everyone else's, I find myself feeling challenged and wanting to grow in poetry. I am fairly new to this, and would welcome your feedback moving forward. Let's continue to interact. Have a beautiful day!

Laura Leiser Date: 9/28/2023 6:39:00 PM I love the shape format of your poem, Mona. Your entreating words of love and longing are very well expressed! Enjoyed your poem! :) Login to Reply Mona Ebel Date: 10/15/2023 7:46:00 AM Thank you, Laura. I had fun creating it. I have come to love poetry. I had no idea there were so many different forms. I love the rules that make writing poetry challenging, and already I have expanded in growth in this new found love I have in poetry. I used to like to write it, but now I am finding myself enjoying reading others. You all are my muses! Have an incredible day