Remember

I remember sensing you were near. I re- member your presence was so clear. I remember the impact your life made. And i knew my life forever changed. I remember sensing you were gone. I remember the loss i felt so strong. I remember the impact your life made. Even now, my life is not the same. I remember. I wont ever forget. The stamp of your life Forever imbedded in my heart, So please remember Who you are to me. And that i wait for you to one day re- member too.

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Christina Bowring

Date: 10/13/2023 8:49:00 AM

This is a very well constructed poem Mona. Very effective! Great expressions of love and what it means to you. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you. :)

Mona Ebel
Date: 10/15/2023 7:37:00 AM

Good morning, Christina. Thank you very much. I appreciate your feedback. I hope we interact more often and encourage one another, challenge one another as we grow in poetry. Blessings to you in return.

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/29/2023 6:13:00 PM

The Shape format of your poem, Mona, is what first drew my attention to it. It is quite wonderful how you can use words to evoke feelings of love and desire in a reader. Reading your poetry was a wonderful experience for me!

Mona Ebel
Date: 10/15/2023 7:43:00 AM

Thank you for the beautiful response. I reread my poetry, and like them well enough, but when I read everyone else's, I find myself feeling challenged and wanting to grow in poetry. I am fairly new to this, and would welcome your feedback moving forward. Let's continue to interact. Have a beautiful day!

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/28/2023 6:39:00 PM

I love the shape format of your poem, Mona. Your entreating words of love and longing are very well expressed! Enjoyed your poem! :)

Mona Ebel
Date: 10/15/2023 7:46:00 AM

Thank you, Laura. I had fun creating it. I have come to love poetry. I had no idea there were so many different forms. I love the rules that make writing poetry challenging, and already I have expanded in growth in this new found love I have in poetry. I used to like to write it, but now I am finding myself enjoying reading others. You all are my muses! Have an incredible day