Remedial Romance

goosebumps lying in bed
ready to be remedied
by
remedial romance

cold sheets
on bare skin
hills and valleys
ready

for him

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/23/2024 7:35:00 PM
Fantastic. Romance is what makes us want to dance, and prance and sing. Romantic walks and picnics are important. My wife has a different view. Pity but that is life I guess. I will always be a hopeless romantic. our eldest daughter has a partner who Romantic, which is good news. Side effects of drugs for depression are a mood killer. Thanks for this one. Regards David
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2024 11:49:00 AM
Thanks, David, and for sharing a bit abour yourself. My Dad and Mom were great romantics together. Mom’s been gone nearly 3 years…Dad misses her so.
Date: 3/22/2024 4:17:00 AM
Like a piece of delicious cake. Who would not eat to the fullest? Hugs.
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2024 7:48:00 AM
LOL…thanks, my friend!
Date: 3/21/2024 7:33:00 PM
Love this...now turn off the light, lol
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2024 8:15:00 PM
LOL ;)
Date: 3/21/2024 11:29:00 AM
Dear Kim, I loved how you encapsulate longing with raw simplicity. Every word is filled with the anticipation and desire for warmth in cold sheets. You created the power of intimacy in its simplest form. - Blessings, Daniel
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2024 11:54:00 AM
Thank You, my friend!
Date: 3/21/2024 10:10:00 AM
Wonderfully dwelling in love and secrets of romance, Kim. Much enjoyed the doting voice of your poem, my friend.
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2024 10:46:00 AM
I love writing about healthy relationships. Why not?! xx
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter