Remedial Romance

goosebumps lying in bed
ready to be remedied
by
remedial romance

cold sheets
on bare skin
hills and valleys
ready

for him
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Smith Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 7:35 PM
Fantastic. Romance is what makes us want to dance, and prance and sing. Romantic walks and picnics are important. My wife has a different view. Pity but that is life I guess. I will always be a hopeless romantic. our eldest daughter has a partner who Romantic, which is good news. Side effects of drugs for depression are a mood killer. Thanks for this one. Regards David
Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 11:49 AM
Thanks, David, and for sharing a bit abour yourself. My Dad and Mom were great romantics together. Mom’s been gone nearly 3 years…Dad misses her so.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 4:17 AM
Like a piece of delicious cake. Who would not eat to the fullest? Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 7:48 AM
LOL…thanks, my friend!
Hind Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 7:33 PM
Love this...now turn off the light, lol
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 8:15 PM
LOL ;)
Rodgers Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 11:29 AM
Dear Kim, I loved how you encapsulate longing with raw simplicity. Every word is filled with the anticipation and desire for warmth in cold sheets. You created the power of intimacy in its simplest form. - Blessings, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 11:54 AM
Thank You, my friend!
Pandit Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Wonderfully dwelling in love and secrets of romance, Kim. Much enjoyed the doting voice of your poem, my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 10:46 AM
I love writing about healthy relationships. Why not?! xx
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