Remarkably Seen

“Remarkably Seen”



a ladybug swoops ~
swift past scarlet snapdragon’s face ~
life’s  palette play




(C) sally young eslinger 2022
A re-write
Thanks be to God
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 6/18/2022 12:54:00 PM
Scene serene; scenic seen. From your imbibing, Creations palette, multi-coloured; images face Off, flight of fancy resplendent jittering leaping Art entreating deeper reading, a beseaching.' G'day Sally.'
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 6/24/2022 7:23:00 AM
Joe, been running a month+late w/ reading and replies. Sorry. My poem is thrilled you got so many visuals from it. I thank you for stopping by to read a nd comment with such toucHing depth. Have a great weekend! xoxo
Date: 6/17/2022 11:54:00 AM
ladybugs are indeed remarkable, the only insect I like (unless bees are insects?) Beautiful imagery of her swooping past the snapdragon!
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 6/24/2022 7:32:00 AM
Hi Michelle, yes bees are insects. They have bug eyes cgphahahahahahawhew) AND they Sting ya! Bees inside blogs have stung me more than when outside! Thank you for caring to comment. So nice.Blessins of creativity bee yours!
Date: 6/15/2022 7:56:00 AM
....insects are one of my favorite camera subject....feathered and furry creatures too....how is your shoulder (been having some 'mechanical' repairs myself....tiring man.....have a good day....will speak soon .....stan
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Date: 6/13/2022 10:21:00 AM
A stunning image Sally, can just imagine the scene. Tom
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 6/13/2022 1:26:00 PM
So nice you liked this. Thanks for your time to read and comment. Have a good week!
Date: 6/13/2022 9:57:00 AM
Love that “life’s palette play” Sally, flowers and insects in glorious hues seen every day… Belle
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 6/13/2022 1:24:00 PM
Well, Belle, some insects are the detestable of my summer but the sweet ladybugs are always a joy. 94 degrees here today…being bedridden can be nice. Haha
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