Remarkably Seen

“Remarkably Seen”



a ladybug swoops ~
swift past scarlet snapdragon’s face ~
life’s  palette play




(C) sally young eslinger 2022
A re-write
Thanks be to God
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Maverick Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 12:54 PM
Scene serene; scenic seen. From your imbibing, Creations palette, multi-coloured; images face Off, flight of fancy resplendent jittering leaping Art entreating deeper reading, a beseaching.' G'day Sally.'
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June 24, 2022 at 7:23 AM
Joe, been running a month+late w/ reading and replies. Sorry. My poem is thrilled you got so many visuals from it. I thank you for stopping by to read a nd comment with such toucHing depth. Have a great weekend! xoxo
Faulkner Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 11:54 AM
ladybugs are indeed remarkable, the only insect I like (unless bees are insects?) Beautiful imagery of her swooping past the snapdragon!
Eslinger Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 7:32 AM
Hi Michelle, yes bees are insects. They have bug eyes cgphahahahahahawhew) AND they Sting ya! Bees inside blogs have stung me more than when outside! Thank you for caring to comment. So nice.Blessins of creativity bee yours!
Blown Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 7:56 AM
....insects are one of my favorite camera subject....feathered and furry creatures too....how is your shoulder (been having some 'mechanical' repairs myself....tiring man.....have a good day....will speak soon .....stan
Cunningham Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 10:21 AM
A stunning image Sally, can just imagine the scene. Tom
Eslinger Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 1:26 PM
So nice you liked this. Thanks for your time to read and comment. Have a good week!
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June 13, 2022 at 9:57 AM
Love that “life’s palette play” Sally, flowers and insects in glorious hues seen every day… Belle
Eslinger Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 1:24 PM
Well, Belle, some insects are the detestable of my summer but the sweet ladybugs are always a joy. 94 degrees here today…being bedridden can be nice. Haha
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