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song becomes reality we play it thru our lifes we met at a distance a stranger to u and i till one night it seemed nice at first just kickin back took a trip to slient hill never to look back in the strange abyss we changed atmosphere my eyes locked with your eyes fire burned inside thought it was some magic but why did the fire die put on some music the romance continued on as we cuddle closer the melody embraced two souls if it means a lot to you u held it dear u pro claimed your love for it never will know why now i listen confused inside it was one night of something that felt right till morning something changed i don't know why it happened this way now u travel on down the road destiny has for you just like myself a different path then yours tho they crossed just one time tho u were more experienced than i u said u were nothing special i dont know why i thought u presented your self well u have a great sense of pride u have a dream to help mistreated children my heart melted inside tho i dont know what happened i dont know why ur idea of this night was way different than mine i was a friend when they kicked u when u was down ate ur food stole ur heat and left u feeling alone inside so i hope u contuine on ur quest to move out but u say were all the same and i just dont know why u acted this way

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Date: 7/27/2014 5:55:00 PM
Joseph, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 7/25/2014 5:15:00 PM
Joseph,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/25/2014 5:58:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Joseph :) - I choose your first great written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/24/2014 9:30:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Joseph. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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