Remains of the Fire

Embers extinguished Spiritual fire remains Wind catches the remnants Never to be fully brought back Allow thyself to prosper Or thou shall never be free

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2013 5:30:00 PM

Epi, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**

Skat A

Date: 4/16/2013 4:34:00 PM

Hi Epi, I have a friend name Epi :-) This is a very deep thought and verse. Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT

Epi C. A Phoenix Writer
Date: 4/16/2013 7:37:00 PM

Must be an awesome friend!;D Thanks for the welcome and feedback on the poem. I'm not to sure if I will be writing a lot or not. The three I have basically came from the same inspiration, I might write more but only time will tell. Yes, I might ask for your feedback since you offered!xD