Remains of Passion

sunburst sky we’ve spanned
     you fly away what remains?
memory feathers in nest

in dream of passion
     i sip your sigh what echoes?
silent music of fusion

July 14, 2021
Syllable count : 5/7/7/5/7/7(HMS)
Contest : Ni(2) Katuata
Sponsor : William Kekaula
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Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 5:21 AM
Very nice, Subimal!
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