Remains

Revenge sweet turning with hate
a brother rises striking blows 
landing hits brother in wicked deeds 
evilness within mans own soul

Cruelty crawling inside desires 
suffering greed of nations they plea 
Rise up against nations man at war 
tearing asunder God's creation 
People slowly murdering loveless

Pride a sinful act of violence 
laced with pain destroying pure love 
everything that once stood out housed peace
so fine cut beautiful, good sharing 
caring  free, in this one, big show rolls 

Keeps turning, the wheel of hope 
whom will speak, as we all become part 
of his heavenly dust in the end 
or  burning remains of hell's fire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 11/16/2014 11:48:00 AM
- A deep and powerful poem, Liam - very well written - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/16/2014 12:07:00 PM
thank you anne lise for the truly wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated have a blessed beautiful sunday dear pal
Date: 11/16/2014 8:11:00 AM
strong pen mate a change to your normal writes Liam I like it hugs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/16/2014 9:33:00 AM
ah linda sure you know me pal wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated wishing you a blessed sunday
Date: 11/16/2014 2:43:00 AM
We always have a choice, to listen to His voice, or go on our on way, we know the end anyway. A superb piece on fire, you have there, sire. Kim Patrice :) Rated!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/16/2014 8:44:00 AM
love is the only choice that candle burns forever suffers for the sake of peace always love i see falls victim to hate wonderful comment kim thank you kindly heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 11/15/2014 11:14:00 PM
Powerful poem you've penned here my dear friend Liam. Permanent peace shall be achieved only one day thru Jesus Christ. Man doesn't have enough love and God in their hearts. Keep your pen golden! A 7 for me! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/16/2014 8:39:00 AM
thank you dorian very kind of you some do not have as much love as others such human frailties of deep emotions wonderful comment dear friend got me thinking bless you
Date: 11/15/2014 8:18:00 PM
Liam Me Irish Mate!! Very well-penned here indeed. I think you will convince the Leprechaun Court of Judges with the high quality, well-articulated write. Going Heavenward is the best option!! Irish Mountain Dew Smiling Always, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/16/2014 8:31:00 AM
well to be honest gary smiling i am the leprechaun king ripping someone stole my pot of gold lol heaven all the way for me ha ha sniffing the old smoke from the auld turf fire hard to beat pure fresh clean living country air thank you kindly for the amazing beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated pal
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