Remaining Gentle As You Bare Your Soul

remaining gentle until you bare your soul
wanting with patient passion for you to take control

as the time arrives, i welcome the feeling with baded breath
as life evaporates, you become slow and thorough while i calmly obsess

becoming still as you make your final move
needing with youthful yearning for you to groove to soothe

when the dream becomes reality, i become as light as time
the aftermath like a slight breeze on a mild day dissipating a favorable percentage of life's hidden crime
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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