Jack Jordan Poet Free verse

Rem Dreams

REM dreams rerun
	the Saturday morning 
	Flash Gordons 
	of my sub-conscience
	on the backs 
	of my eyelids.

	The battle between 
	good and evil, 
	Flash versus Ming the Magnificent, 
	continues unabated 
	in the waking world,
	so I might as well 
	go back to sleep.

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Poet Destroyer A April 13, 2013 at 9:27 PM i meant the REM fall... lol

Poet Destroyer A April 13, 2013 at 9:26 PM I like the dream, Jack... and i don't blame you for wanting to go back to sleep.. . Enjoyed, your haiku. Thank you for liking my featured poem. By the way I was going to ask you if you are from Texas... :-) Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT xox~LINDA"" Jack Jordan April 13, 2013 at 10:37 PM Thanks for the comment. These days I don't know whether I'm a Texan or an Okie or a Texokie... Jack

Tim Ryerson April 11, 2013 at 8:38 AM 'Flash Gordons of my sub-conscience on the backs of my eyelids'...Wow Jack Jordan April 11, 2013 at 9:15 AM Thanks for reading and commenting... Jack