Rely On Me

A shot in the dark.
Alone in the world.
No one to talk to
And no one to hold.
So blame everyone

For your bad life.
See how that goes.
You won't get far.
It will get worse.

Happiness
begins when
you rely

On the
One, true

God
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 5:27 PM
Yes it does Brandee, congrats on your win in Brian's contest, God Bless, mj
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February 17, 2010 at 4:40 PM
Great message, Brandee and congratulations! andrea
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February 17, 2010 at 3:58 PM
Congrats Brandee on your winning poem in the Hex contest.. a wonderful win for a most beautiful write ..from an inspired and talented poetess.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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February 17, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Bravo, Brandee! Hear the drum rolls! You placed in the winners’ circle for your creative entry in the Poetry Soup member contest, “WHAT THE HEX” sponsored by: Catie Lindsey. Well done! Smiles, Dane Ann
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February 17, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Congratulations on your win...enjoyed reading...Marty
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February 17, 2010 at 7:46 AM
A wonderful poem, congratulations on this winning place!! Love, Carrie
Reynolds Avatar
September 20, 2008 at 3:08 AM
A very moving, enlightening poem, congrats, and thanks for entering! Love Kristin
Winter Avatar
September 17, 2008 at 12:21 PM
Congratulations Brandee on your win in Kristin's contest! Well done! Love, Shar
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September 10, 2008 at 7:25 PM
Amen! And in God all things are possible. Nice use of this challenging form. Blessings to you for sharing your thoughts with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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