Reluctant Transformation

I'm turning into a werewolf
It's freakin' me out, can't ya see?
My vision of nicety
don't include spicity
of locks gone electrically frazzled.

My soul still feels staid and moral
but if people take note of me
in this state they won't rate
my belongity
the way I think
they think
it should be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 4:16 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest Nancy. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 3:59 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, nancy
Lane Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 10:28 AM
Well written Nancy and a lot of fun. Tony
Onclaud Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 1:26 AM
freakin' funny, nancy... . heaps of cheers for the BIG-TIME win..:) huggs!
Freeman Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 10:33 PM
Great lines Nancy, Thanks for a humorous write in support of my contest. Agape, Moses
Williams Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 5:27 PM
hey Nancy congrats on a great win David
Sweetheart Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 4:47 PM
Congrats Nancy on a fantastico win luv with this witty write .. superbly fun filled from that crazy photo ..enjoy..
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 6:24 PM
Great write and witty...with love...old Jack
Sweetheart Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 1:01 PM
wonderful play on words Nancy and great rhyme ..bit of advice ..stay away from silver bullets luv.. were wolves cannot survive but this piece will top the charts for sure ..good luck...
Jones Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 7:24 PM
haha.. great advice! do believe I'll take it :)
Ball Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 10:49 PM
HA! Someone else who thought he looked like a werewolf. Wrote two about it. One for the contest and one for fun. Great write Nancy. Good Luck! God Bless, JB
Richards Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 9:55 PM
Thanks for the comment, Nancy on my last posting. ...and yes, I do admire Warren Buffet...I know about him, and like what he stands for) was using his name just because it rhymed with miss muffet, just for fun, but I have changed my poem in case it was "too" desrespectful. Thanks!
Mehta Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 9:20 PM
Lovely take on the contest, nancy
Richards Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 8:30 PM
Love it!!! Love that word ..."belongity"....I could borrow that word from time to time, when I don't feel like I fit in!! LOL !! This should do very well in John's contest!!
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