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Reluctant Dawn



Hesitant awakening ... 
misty veil reveals another
24 sixty 
incremental uncertainty

Retinal unwillingness
Indecision guides each fretful,
retrograde step
Nocturnal blurred moral vision 
offers no lucid clarity ... 
only ethical neutrality

What’s the right thing to do?
Hollow convictions refuse to ask,
opaque principles
don’t have crystal 
clear courage to bravely choose

Ain’t nothing left to soul salvage,
a gluttonous life
squats out enamel feelings empty

Leaving just a cockatrice shell
of tear-tainted desires
Temporal reverie of carnal thoughts:
gold mind lust 
foolishly lung expired

The rosy pleasures of youth has age withered;
a sullen heart shattered,
pierced by thorny choices from fallen pain petals

A reluctant dawn
reoccurs 
in the sunset years

Dwindling light of hope
presently disappears

As grave, past misgivings
take hold
of tomorrow fears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/17/2019 11:22:00 AM
These are my favorite lines: "gold mind lust foolishly lung expired" and "A reluctant dawn reoccurs in the sunset years". You paint your words so well.
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Date: 1/15/2019 11:03:00 PM
An very involving moment of moral introspection; very nicely crafted, Mr Freddie. As always, my friend, peace, rest.
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Date: 1/15/2019 12:23:00 PM
Very deep and with such sadness at the ending Freddie. Well written and expressed :)
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