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Reluctant Dawn

Hesitant awakening ... misty veil reveals another 24 sixty incremental uncertainty Retinal unwillingness Indecision guides each fretful, retrograde step Nocturnal blurred moral vision offers no lucid clarity ... only ethical neutrality What’s the right thing to do? Hollow convictions refuse to ask, opaque principles don’t have crystal clear courage to bravely choose Ain’t nothing left to soul salvage, a gluttonous life squats out enamel feelings empty Leaving just a cockatrice shell of tear-tainted desires Temporal reverie of carnal thoughts: gold mind lust foolishly lung expired The rosy pleasures of youth has age withered; a sullen heart shattered, pierced by thorny choices from fallen pain petals A reluctant dawn reoccurs in the sunset years Dwindling light of hope presently disappears As grave, past misgivings take hold of tomorrow fears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/17/2019 11:22:00 AM
These are my favorite lines: "gold mind lust foolishly lung expired" and "A reluctant dawn reoccurs in the sunset years". You paint your words so well.
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Date: 1/15/2019 11:03:00 PM
An very involving moment of moral introspection; very nicely crafted, Mr Freddie. As always, my friend, peace, rest.
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Date: 1/15/2019 12:23:00 PM
Very deep and with such sadness at the ending Freddie. Well written and expressed :)
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