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Relinquish Control

Oh dear weary soul,
relinquish control
and simply be still,
aligned with God’s will.

Inhale divine grace
at an easy pace 
and exhale intent,
granting love consent.

Tranquil eye mindful
makes life beautiful.
As our heart lotus blooms,
blissful rapture zooms.

17-August-2022
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Ashley Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 10:16 PM
Dear Unseeking Seeker, acceptance and surrender can be difficult for the physical being. But, the conscious soulful choice to “relinquish control” indeed “blooms blissful rapture”. Your deep and beautiful poem radiates within my heart lotus. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 11:03 PM
Indeed! The blossoming of the soul is a beautiful feeling..
Seeker Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 10:33 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Susan. Just experiment for a few months ~ let go and allow God to carry us, all then is enabled. It’s our resistance that delays soul’s blossoming.
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