Relinquish Control

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Oh dear weary soul, relinquish control and simply be still, aligned with God’s will. Inhale divine grace at an easy pace and exhale intent, granting love consent. Tranquil eye mindful makes life beautiful. As our heart lotus blooms, blissful rapture zooms. 17-August-2022

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/16/2022 10:16:00 PM

Dear Unseeking Seeker, acceptance and surrender can be difficult for the physical being. But, the conscious soulful choice to “relinquish control” indeed “blooms blissful rapture”. Your deep and beautiful poem radiates within my heart lotus. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/16/2022 11:03:00 PM

Indeed! The blossoming of the soul is a beautiful feeling..

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/16/2022 10:33:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words, Susan. Just experiment for a few months ~ let go and allow God to carry us, all then is enabled. It’s our resistance that delays soul’s blossoming.