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Relieved of Duty

I've learned that God takes for us not from us.



by John H Loving III
For the "One Amazing Line" contest
sponsored by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~

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Sara Kendrick

December 16, 2010 at 3:02 PM

Good one God..So true..Congratulations..Sara

Francine Roberts

December 15, 2010 at 8:40 AM

lovely line, congrats on your win in the contest

Daniel Cwiak

December 15, 2010 at 8:32 AM

Of course, I meant to say "insightful"... Dan C

Daniel Cwiak

December 15, 2010 at 8:31 AM

John, you have a very inciteful write with this one line. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Audrey Haick

December 15, 2010 at 8:12 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest, John! Amazing line for sure! Hope you're doing well. Love, Audrey

Eamon Duffin

December 15, 2010 at 6:48 AM

Hi. Congratulations on your deserved win in the 'One Amazing Line', contest. Eamon

Nette Onclaud

December 15, 2010 at 3:40 AM

best wishes on your well-deserved award! enjoy… nette

Andrea Dietrich

December 14, 2010 at 9:42 PM

VERY wise, just like a quote from the Bible! congratulations, John.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 14, 2010 at 7:36 PM

Congrats John on your super win in the One Liner contest with this eloquent line . enjoy another top ten victory with luv..

John Freeman

December 14, 2010 at 5:42 PM

You've Got it John. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses

Deb Radke

December 14, 2010 at 3:12 PM

Oh wonderful monoku. So very well said in this one short line of 10 words. Everything is here, isn't it. Congratulations on your win in the contest.

James Fraser

December 14, 2010 at 2:14 PM

Congratulations on your win in Constance's fine contest John >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 14, 2010 at 5:41 AM

Congratulations John iii on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol

David Smalling

December 9, 2010 at 4:01 AM

The one constant that will always shine is our faith ... and the deeper it is the more we understand. This is a powerful statement of wisdom understood.

Sara Kendrick

December 8, 2010 at 12:31 PM

We learn the most from those hard times whatever they be..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck..I was delighted that you stopped by and left such wonderful comments on my work..Sara

Phyllis Babcock

December 7, 2010 at 8:10 AM

A great one line poem. Good luck in the contest. Phyl

Nette Onclaud

December 6, 2010 at 9:58 PM

simply astonishing monoku, john! could be a quotable quote!... love this and wishing you the best in the contest... thanks for coming by with your comments; much appreciated!warmest, nette

James Peranteau

December 6, 2010 at 11:30 AM

A very thought provoking write here dear poet ! Wonderful thought for us all ! much love, james

Anthony Barrow

December 6, 2010 at 11:09 AM

point well taken

Audrey Haick

December 6, 2010 at 10:52 AM

Beautiful thought, John..you have created a perfect line to post around our house! Love, audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

December 6, 2010 at 7:54 AM

Yes, this is so true, John. You have a wonderful entry. Be sure to put your name, the contest name and the sponsor's name on your entry as per contest rules. I think you have a winner! Love, Carolyn

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