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Relieved of Duty

I've learned that God takes for us not from us. by John H Loving III For the "One Amazing Line" contest sponsored by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2010 3:02:00 PM

Good one God..So true..Congratulations..Sara

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/15/2010 8:40:00 AM

lovely line, congrats on your win in the contest

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/15/2010 8:32:00 AM

Of course, I meant to say "insightful"... Dan C

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/15/2010 8:31:00 AM

John, you have a very inciteful write with this one line. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/15/2010 8:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest, John! Amazing line for sure! Hope you're doing well. Love, Audrey

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/15/2010 6:48:00 AM

Hi. Congratulations on your deserved win in the 'One Amazing Line', contest. Eamon

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/15/2010 3:40:00 AM

best wishes on your well-deserved award! enjoy… nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2010 9:42:00 PM

VERY wise, just like a quote from the Bible! congratulations, John.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/14/2010 7:36:00 PM

Congrats John on your super win in the One Liner contest with this eloquent line . enjoy another top ten victory with luv..

John Freeman

Date: 12/14/2010 5:42:00 PM

You've Got it John. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses

Deb Radke

Date: 12/14/2010 3:12:00 PM

Oh wonderful monoku. So very well said in this one short line of 10 words. Everything is here, isn't it. Congratulations on your win in the contest.

James Fraser

Date: 12/14/2010 2:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Constance's fine contest John >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2010 5:41:00 AM

Congratulations John iii on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol

David Smalling

Date: 12/9/2010 4:01:00 AM

The one constant that will always shine is our faith ... and the deeper it is the more we understand. This is a powerful statement of wisdom understood.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/8/2010 12:31:00 PM

We learn the most from those hard times whatever they be..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck..I was delighted that you stopped by and left such wonderful comments on my work..Sara

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/7/2010 8:10:00 AM

A great one line poem. Good luck in the contest. Phyl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/6/2010 9:58:00 PM

simply astonishing monoku, john! could be a quotable quote!... love this and wishing you the best in the contest... thanks for coming by with your comments; much appreciated!warmest, nette

James Peranteau

Date: 12/6/2010 11:30:00 AM

A very thought provoking write here dear poet ! Wonderful thought for us all ! much love, james

Anthony Barrow

Date: 12/6/2010 11:09:00 AM

point well taken

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/6/2010 10:52:00 AM

Beautiful thought, John..you have created a perfect line to post around our house! Love, audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/6/2010 7:54:00 AM

Yes, this is so true, John. You have a wonderful entry. Be sure to put your name, the contest name and the sponsor's name on your entry as per contest rules. I think you have a winner! Love, Carolyn