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Relief Beyond Belief

when all hope is lost randomness regains control ~ time to befriend chance Hope Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani Syllable counter PS 5/7/5 01/04/2022

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Alexis Y.

Date: 2/16/2022 1:59:00 PM

Hi David, You said so much in a few words. Well done. Congrats on your win. Have a nice day-Alexis

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/16/2022 2:04:00 PM

Thank you Alexis, I wasn’t sure if many people would get this one, but when you pare back hope, it appears to boil down to chance, cheers David

Mohan Chutani

Date: 2/16/2022 1:52:00 AM

Congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/16/2022 2:55:00 AM

Thank you Mohan for seeing the logic in my senryu, and the placement, cheers David

Bill Baker

Date: 2/4/2022 1:56:00 PM

Thoughtful poem, David. Thanks for sharing, Bill

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2022 2:12:00 PM

Thank you Bill, without hope perhaps chance is the only default, cheers David