Relief

thirsty flowers beg
all of nature suffering...
refreshing rains fall

By: Joyce Johnson

For contest "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please."  Won #5

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Carol Sunshine Brown

September 6, 2011 at 8:46 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance La France's "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Caryl Ramsdale

September 5, 2011 at 12:13 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" poetry contest sponsored by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~.

Andrea Dietrich

September 4, 2011 at 8:15 PM

A really nice one for needful rain, Joyce, how have you been lately? Congrats on your win.

Sara Kendrick

September 4, 2011 at 3:44 PM

Good one in the presence of the hot dry weather we have had this summer..Congrats..Sara

Kim Merryman

September 4, 2011 at 2:36 PM

Congrats on your win, Joyce! Kim

Black Eyed Susan

September 4, 2011 at 2:30 PM

good title for this :) I'm relieved at the end. congratulations on your win!

Jack Horne

September 4, 2011 at 9:01 AM

Many congrats, Joyce : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 4, 2011 at 7:56 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest,Joyce

Nette Onclaud

September 4, 2011 at 3:20 AM

sweet cheers to you for placing real well on the winning chart! :)huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 3, 2011 at 11:18 PM

Congrats Joyce on 5th place win with this stunning entry luv.. super one..

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 2, 2011 at 10:50 AM

I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Joyce. I hope you have a wonderful weekend and please keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

September 2, 2011 at 3:19 AM

a very refreshing haiku! HOw are you, Joyce. I am fighting to keep my eyes open as I finish up comments I owe! Best of luck in the haiku contest. LUv,Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 1, 2011 at 10:54 PM

splendid visuals Joyce and some parts of the country need so much rain and we have too much rain in NJ... feeling every line so sweetly penned ..good luck my friend with luv..