Relief

thirsty flowers beg
all of nature suffering...
refreshing rains fall

By: Joyce Johnson

For contest "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please."  Won #5

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2011 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance La France's "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/5/2011 12:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" poetry contest sponsored by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2011 8:15:00 PM

A really nice one for needful rain, Joyce, how have you been lately? Congrats on your win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/4/2011 3:44:00 PM

Good one in the presence of the hot dry weather we have had this summer..Congrats..Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/4/2011 2:36:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Joyce! Kim

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/4/2011 2:30:00 PM

good title for this :) I'm relieved at the end. congratulations on your win!

Jack Horne

Date: 9/4/2011 9:01:00 AM

Many congrats, Joyce : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/4/2011 7:56:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest,Joyce

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/4/2011 3:20:00 AM

sweet cheers to you for placing real well on the winning chart! :)huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/3/2011 11:18:00 PM

Congrats Joyce on 5th place win with this stunning entry luv.. super one..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2011 10:50:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Joyce. I hope you have a wonderful weekend and please keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2011 3:19:00 AM

a very refreshing haiku! HOw are you, Joyce. I am fighting to keep my eyes open as I finish up comments I owe! Best of luck in the haiku contest. LUv,Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2011 10:54:00 PM

splendid visuals Joyce and some parts of the country need so much rain and we have too much rain in NJ... feeling every line so sweetly penned ..good luck my friend with luv..