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relief

do you ever have your contact bother you all day,
and then, just before you take it out,
it fixes itself?
that’s how i feel when i’m with you ***
we were almost to the end of our walk. “i’m dissatisfied,” you muttered, avoiding my glance. i wish you had met my eyes.
we could have both seen we were both afraid of ***
i dreamt that we lied in your bed for three hours. you said, “you’re such a f*cking beautiful human.” i tried not to whimper.
in your bed for three hours i told the truth ***
you almost told me last time. your lip was quivering. to a passerby, our hug may have looked a little bit too long.
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October 2, 2026 at 7:49 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly
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