Relic Church

An old wooden shack,
Hidden in the hills of home;
Remnants of the past.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Neal Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 7:37 PM
Serene place, must be precious. Love E.
Martin Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 11:22 PM
A peaceful scene in the hills of home. Tyler
Neal Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 2:44 PM
Wow, beautiful senryu, remnants of the past. DN
Gass Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 1:38 PM
Awesome Senryu, Raul. Your images are outstanding in this piece! I, too, can easily imagine a deep, rich story attached to this piece. Love, Robin
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March 9, 2009 at 12:17 PM
What a picture you paint with words in this concise poem. It also has a deeper message. Nice one! Thank you for your kind comments on my haiku. Blessings to you. Karen
Higgins Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 7:52 AM
This is very good Raul.. so clear.. the words bring this alive.
P. Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 5:12 AM
well said... you do this form with such ease!! loved it ~ Arany
Shoes Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 9:29 PM
Forboding image. There's actually alot in this little poem; the last line in particular. I wanted this to contine.
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