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Relic Church

An old wooden shack, Hidden in the hills of home; Remnants of the past.

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Elizabeth Neal

Date: 3/24/2009 7:37:00 PM

Serene place, must be precious. Love E.

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/23/2009 11:22:00 PM

A peaceful scene in the hills of home. Tyler

Daniel Neal

Date: 3/12/2009 2:44:00 PM

Wow, beautiful senryu, remnants of the past. DN

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/9/2009 1:38:00 PM

Awesome Senryu, Raul. Your images are outstanding in this piece! I, too, can easily imagine a deep, rich story attached to this piece. Love, Robin

Date: 3/9/2009 12:17:00 PM

What a picture you paint with words in this concise poem. It also has a deeper message. Nice one! Thank you for your kind comments on my haiku. Blessings to you. Karen

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/8/2009 7:52:00 AM

This is very good Raul.. so clear.. the words bring this alive.

Arany P.

Date: 3/8/2009 5:12:00 AM

well said... you do this form with such ease!! loved it ~ Arany

Dimestore Shoes

Date: 3/7/2009 9:29:00 PM

Forboding image. There's actually alot in this little poem; the last line in particular. I wanted this to contine.