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Reliance

Turning tired eyes upward, only the white ceiling stares back; filled with a numbness that started somewhere between the heart and the latest unsteady breath, I turn to you to ensure that I do not forget what it is to laugh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/3/2008 4:11:00 PM
Awesome use of this form, Tracy!! Its been awhile since you've posted a write ... hope you come back soon with more wonders like this ... smile ... love the beginning and had not a clue it would end with such a wonderful word !!
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Date: 9/10/2008 9:27:00 AM
Wonderful write. I've seen that type of courage in some friends and often wondered if I could do the same depnding on circumstance. God Bless. Vince
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