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Releasing the Load

A sky’s pasty pallet, thickly stroked with a heavy brush, lends pale shadows to the earth below while a filament of a memory improves the dreariness with joyous rays Soon to follow comes the rain as the clouds lessen their laden load and the day brightens as remembrances lighten and sorrow steams away on the pavement of a renewing heart © Debra Squyres

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/25/2014 8:55:00 AM
You've epitomized the joy of being alive with this one. Hope your life stays steam cleaned. Peace. :)
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Date: 10/25/2014 7:55:00 AM
- A deep, touching and beautiful poem - I wish you a lovely weekend, Debra! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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