Releasing the Load

A sky’s pasty pallet, 
thickly stroked
with a heavy brush,
lends pale shadows
to the earth below
while a filament  
of a memory
improves the dreariness
with joyous rays

Soon to follow
comes the rain
as the clouds lessen
their laden load
and the day brightens
as remembrances lighten
and sorrow steams away
on the pavement 
of a renewing heart

© Debra Squyres
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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October 25, 2014 at 8:55 AM
You've epitomized the joy of being alive with this one. Hope your life stays steam cleaned. Peace. :)
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October 25, 2014 at 7:55 AM
- A deep, touching and beautiful poem - I wish you a lovely weekend, Debra! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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