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Swing, Rush, Playground, Meadow, Play

There is a story that needs to be told A grown-up child now holds the secret in The raw emotion trapped releases bold Dreams that haunt in midnight's tangled den Way back he was idolized, her anger blocked Pushed down on the spot but arose at night Where demons chased and the small child mocked In dreams she would run and jump with all her might He said 'twas you who came out tempting me Told her to stay you can't come to the pasture Her anger boiled beneath the surface free The dreams began totally to be her master What he did when she was seven years old Rest in the grave with him and remains untold

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Howard Kerr

Date: 1/7/2021 4:06:00 AM

A powerful and poignant statement on a terrifying subject. Congratulations, Sara. Thanks for your soupmail on my Famine poem and your observations relating to it. Howard Kerr

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/7/2021 4:44:00 AM

Howard, Your acknowledgement of my work is uplifting. Sara

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/2/2021 7:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Sara. Molestation is a horror that affects--sometimes ruins--many lives! Janice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/2/2021 8:23:00 AM

Janice, It is a wonder that my generation survived for what was called punishment back then is considered abuse today. It was the accepted norm for homes, schools, etc. I am glad that new ways are in place today. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Greg Gaul

Date: 1/1/2021 10:16:00 AM

Handsome sonnet. Loved the last line of the third stanza. Kipling? And, of course the poignant volta. Congratulations.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/2/2021 3:04:00 AM

I found the poem about which you were speaking. "If" by Rudyard Kipling. I had read it and my line is similar to his line. It is amazing how we can internalize things and it come out in our writing. He was a great writer and I do enjoy many of his works. Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/1/2021 12:44:00 PM

Greg, Your visit to my page is encouraging. I have read some of Kipling's work but it has been awhile. Does seem that something about that line rings a familiarity to a line somewhere else. I will have to type it in and see if I get a match to another writer. I typed it in and it came up matches to gaming and Nemo. LOL..I haven't even seen these. LOL ..Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Gary Radice

Date: 1/1/2021 4:56:00 AM

Sara, the very difficult and horrific subject of child abuse is powerfully and very realistically portrayed in your work here. The poem stands as a testament to your strength, beliefs and ability as to how you have somehow managed to move on and live your life.

Disha Munot

Date: 11/4/2020 10:16:00 PM

Very powerful and heartbreaking poem Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/5/2020 2:56:00 AM

Disha, Thanks for the encouraging review of my work. Sara

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 9/23/2020 1:02:00 PM

Wow, this is so powerful but so sad. An immeasurable distance covered in 14 lines.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/23/2020 3:35:00 PM

D.W., Thanks for your sympathetic understanding. Child abuse or molestation is a horrible thing. I appreciate your dropping by. Sara

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/7/2020 2:29:00 PM

I especially agree with Harry's comment. This is a great and powerful piece my friend. A sad reality and expressed so very well by a poet of immense talent, courage and insight! A fav.. God bless...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/8/2020 6:13:00 AM

Robert, I am honored that you would fav it. A story that will never be told but the emotion was written. Your presence at my work is uplifting. Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 6/21/2020 2:25:00 PM

powerful but heartbreaking, for sure

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/22/2020 7:38:00 AM

Jack, Thanks for dropping by and reading my work. I appreciate your honest review. Sara

Funom Makama

Date: 6/8/2020 9:21:00 PM

released indeed! This seems terrible, real and well expressive. If this is a reflection of a true life story, then the girl needs help. Great write Sara, its been a while.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/9/2020 4:46:00 PM

Funom, You will notice that I said, "The grown-up child". So that tells you lived through it to the other side but the child within still suffers the pain of the past. I do appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment and be really concerned about the child. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/5/2020 9:47:00 AM

Wow, sad, deep and so profound, yet as a poem a joy to read this awesome write, that needed to be shared. Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/6/2020 5:47:00 AM

Harry, Thanks for the heartfelt comment on my work. I appreciate you dropping by. I hope that you and your family are well during this horrible time. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 6/2/2020 10:06:00 PM

A sad poem, Sara, very deep feelings of hate. very well written with meaning and flow. Hugs Eve

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/4/2020 10:17:00 AM

Eve, Thanks for your review of my work. I was wondering if I expressed the emotion well in this one. I am glad that you let me know. Sara

Judy Ball

Date: 6/2/2020 5:49:00 AM

WoW! Sara this is fraught with emotion held deeply within the breast. Unspent anger wishing to be set free. It is never the victim's fault when innocence is misused. A great write. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/2/2020 9:24:00 AM

Judy, Thanks for the understanding review of my work. Abuse in any form hurts a person especially a child who hasn't the ability to handle the situation. Your presence at my work is uplifting. Sara

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/2/2020 3:29:00 AM

This is very powerful Sara. Abuse of any kind is traumatic for a child and lives in the back of the mind forever. So well written! Blessings xxoo

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/2/2020 8:09:00 AM

Connie, Yes, abuse should be stopped and the only way is to get into each person's heart and plant the love that should be there. Sara