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Release Me

Release me Give me that touch The one I need so much Apply a little pressure But not a lot And don’t stop For I am tangled Strangled right up in a knot Hard as a rock Release me from this spiralling, spinning spatial awareness Of never ending twisted taught ness And tightness and Terrible wrongness Give me that touch Don't make it too light alright... Pskips

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Date: 7/23/2022 5:57:00 AM
Nicely written, Paulyne, very expressive. I hope the pain has eased. Welcome to Poetry Soup. John
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Paulyne Johnston
Date: 7/24/2022 8:27:00 AM
Thankyou John I appreciate your comment and yes I am not in pain anymore ??
Date: 7/2/2022 9:08:00 AM
Hey what do you think of this poem I wrote it when I was experiencing a lot of pain.
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