Release Me

Release me
Give me that touch
The one I need so much

Apply a little pressure 
But not a lot 
And don’t stop

For I am tangled 
Strangled right up in a knot
Hard as a rock
Release me from this spiralling, spinning spatial awareness 
Of never ending twisted taught ness 
And tightness and
Terrible wrongness

Give me that touch
Don't make it too light
alright...

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Gondolf Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 5:57 AM
Nicely written, Paulyne, very expressive. I hope the pain has eased. Welcome to Poetry Soup. John
Johnston Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 8:27 AM
Thankyou John I appreciate your comment and yes I am not in pain anymore ??
Johnston Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 9:08 AM
Hey what do you think of this poem I wrote it when I was experiencing a lot of pain.
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