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Release

My limbs as heavy as mountains, My mind chaotically at peace. My emotions flood like fountains, And my thoughts will never cease. Frustration mounts my angered soul, Yet too tired to let that be, So instead I chose to write this scroll, Releasing torment out of me. I go to a place inside my mind, A place of majestic simplicity, And in this realm I yearn to find, It bringing calm and peace to me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/3/2017 8:27:00 PM
wonderful poem Stefani
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Stefani Leslie
Date: 12/4/2017 8:51:00 AM
Thank you very much! I'm new to this sight so I encourage you and anyone else to please leave feed back. I'm trying to become a better writer.
Date: 12/3/2017 7:27:00 PM
A wonderful release...All the best Stefani
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Date: 12/4/2017 8:53:00 AM
Thank you!!! I truly appreciate the feed back, and would love to hear what you (or anyone else) might think of the others I have posted. TRUE honesty/constructive criticism is what I'm looking for. All the best to you as well!!