Relaxing Bath

I feel like slipping through the skin enveloped in water
A cleasning time to ripple my water into dreamy rhymes
Running my fingers through there steamy haze
Like a child with a sense of wonderment in her gaze
These are the times when my mind wanders free
An environment imagined and felt by only by me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Allison Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 2:38 PM
I love my relaxing bath and can really relate to how you feel as described in the poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Bohto Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 7:03 PM
Thanks Jan. I feel like my writing is crap. I'm listening to his old lies. Thanks for picking me up.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace