Relativity a Freed Verse
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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment
RELATIVITY
surrounded
by contrast
with the extraordinary
marking
the moment
visually
interesting
with jagged
with lines
of graffiti
wrinkles
in
its depths
a fire
blazes
a strange
ritual
of established
in the mirror
are wonderously
narrowed
yet
barely resolved
into
the shadow
of
existential
intensity
touching
compassion
tender
kind& vulnerable
deeper
than
the presence
of
a living
consciousness
so tangible
this
emotional presence
full of mystey
when seen
afresh
opens
the senses
& imagination
to reveal
an insight
of universal
vulnerability
& tragedy
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2023
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