Relativity a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

RELATIVITY surrounded by contrast with the extraordinary marking the moment visually interesting with jagged with lines of graffiti wrinkles in its depths a fire blazes a strange ritual of established in the mirror are wonderously narrowed yet barely resolved into the shadow of existential intensity touching compassion tender kind& vulnerable deeper than the presence of a living consciousness so tangible this emotional presence full of mystey when seen afresh opens the senses & imagination to reveal an insight of universal vulnerability & tragedy

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