Relativity

some might say she’s plain 
some might even say she’s vain
Newton’s laws aren’t understood
no one sees the good 
for me she’s the loveliest
to some, she just seems modest
just cause and effect? 
to me all free laws reflect: 
relatively...she’s perfect!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 5:50 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..... nicely penned piece.
James Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 12:13 AM
Thank you very much Janis, and thank you for hosting the competition.
Y. Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 3:20 PM
Hi James, I enjoyed your take on the theme. Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
James Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 1:54 PM
Thank you very much Alexis
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 8:54 AM
love the clever theme you chose congrats on your win James:-) hugs jan xx
James Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 12:14 AM
Thank you Jan for your kind words!
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