Relatively Creaking

My house has got arthritis,
it is seventy years old,
and symptoms become noticeable
when the weather's turning cold.
The kitchen door starts moaning
as I go in and out,
the roof timbers are groaning
when the central heating cuts out.
Window frames sigh
just like I
when getting out of bed,
the hinges creak as if to speak
of staying closed instead.
The skeleton of my bed frame
which every night I dream on,
calls out when I turn over, asking
if I'll rub some cream on.
With all of its infirmities
as far as I can see,
it may cry out and whinge and moan
but not as much as me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Delaney Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 2:10 AM
Love the humorous note in this one, Viv: Where do I find nettle tea? Ha ha SuZ
Inman Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 10:00 AM
Delightful Viv, nettle tea? Yeaaaahhh, I'll bet.
Wigley Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 11:00 PM
Indeedy, James, the old nettle tea three times a day is still keeping me mobile. I don't really moan that much, more poetic license. Hope you're well, stay safe. Regards, Viv
Allison Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 2:47 PM
ooh makes me feel old mr Viv lol:-) a bit of sunshine and goose grease and we will be fine:-) hugs jan xx
Lawless Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 5:44 AM
Viv, the story is told that one day as John Adams sat in front of his house a passerby asked him "and how is Mr. Adams today?" to which he answered "Mr. Adams is fine. Mr. Adam's house is falling apart. I wouldn't be surprised if he moved out soon."
Wigley Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 6:48 AM
Mines not quite that bad yet, John. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Cunningham Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 2:41 AM
Haha enjoyed your verse Viv, hope you're well, apart from a few creaks lol. Tom
Wigley Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 6:49 AM
Still soldiering on thanks, Tom, got to thank nettle tea for keeping me going. Regards, Viv
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