Relationship Correlation

Life together is a sip of joy, familiar with each other's noise, secrets shared together from the soul, euphoric laughter spent like change; hands laced in rings of wedding, physical touch screams their name, smiling eyes caught on film, holidays spent holding you for a thrill; hugging hips and dancing slowly, heart beats in sync, inhaling your scent and relishing its power compliments lead flattery; hands intertwined deep in prayer, lives built on nothing but care.
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Scott Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 7:05 PM
This is a beautiful poetic dance of two souls. Very lovely to read (fav). Sx
Agustin Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 9:09 PM
Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Meanwhile, I greet you with a Joyous New Year with this prayer from the Bible in Numbers 6:24-26, "The Lord bless thee, and keep thee: The Lord make his face shine upon thee, and be gracious unto thee: The Lord lift up his countenance upon thee, and give thee peace."
Bowring Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 2:23 PM
A great poem Candice and well written. Lovely expression throughout the poem. I love the opening line,’ Life together is a sip of joy ‘ So lovely! Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :):)
Wells Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 10:03 PM
'...secrets shared together from the soul, euphoric laughter spent like change;" There are so many images like these throughout the poem that create a mosaic of color, light, and sensation, making it very powerful. This is very well-penned, Candice!
Yates Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 1:19 PM
Thank you :) This is one of my favorite poems that I've written.
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September 25, 2023 at 12:43 AM
Seems that life is a ball, energetic and romantic, who could ask for anything more. A lovely poem Candice… Belle
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