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Relationship Correlation

Life together is a sip of joy, familiar with each other's noise, secrets shared together from the soul, euphoric laughter spent like change; hands laced in rings of wedding, physical touch screams their name, smiling eyes caught on film, holidays spent holding you for a thrill; hugging hips and dancing slowly, heart beats in sync, inhaling your scent and relishing its power compliments lead flattery; hands intertwined deep in prayer, lives built on nothing but care.e

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Sam Scott

Date: 4/19/2024 7:05:00 PM

This is a beautiful poetic dance of two souls. Very lovely to read (fav). Sx

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/3/2024 9:09:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Meanwhile, I greet you with a Joyous New Year with this prayer from the Bible in Numbers 6:24-26, "The Lord bless thee, and keep thee: The Lord make his face shine upon thee, and be gracious unto thee: The Lord lift up his countenance upon thee, and give thee peace."

Christina Bowring

Date: 10/18/2023 2:23:00 PM

A great poem Candice and well written. Lovely expression throughout the poem. I love the opening line,’ Life together is a sip of joy ‘ So lovely! Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :):)

Thomas Wells

Date: 10/14/2023 10:03:00 PM

'...secrets shared together from the soul, euphoric laughter spent like change;" There are so many images like these throughout the poem that create a mosaic of color, light, and sensation, making it very powerful. This is very well-penned, Candice!

Candice Yates
Date: 10/18/2023 1:19:00 PM

Thank you :) This is one of my favorite poems that I've written.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/25/2023 12:43:00 AM

Seems that life is a ball, energetic and romantic, who could ask for anything more. A lovely poem Candice… Belle

Tom Woody

Date: 9/21/2023 12:59:00 PM

You've certainly hit all the high notes. My fave line? Familiar with each other's noise. There's something deeply personal about that, and a bit humorous. I also like the screaming part. Groooowl. Next you'll have to do one on the lows. Very nice

Candice Yates
Date: 9/24/2023 8:02:00 PM

That's my favorite line too!