Relationship

Have you being in any relationship
At the beginning of every relationship, our lovers goes like
Baby, I love you
Boo, you are a blessing
Bae, you are my greatest assert
Boo, never will I leave you
I know people even hear more than this from their partners
And that’s mostly at the beginning of every relationship
But if people are to use the incipient stages of their relationship as benchmarks
Then I can boldly say, no relationship will last
Because the first day, month and year in our relationships are best experience we always have
And they are the moments when there is so much love and care 
That our lovers would fight and kill for us if anyone dares
That was the moment that our partners were angles sent from God


Soon, we will easily do forget about the sweet relationship we begin
The one that they themselves considered unbreakable
As we saw our love incomparable
But never was it our fault
Except for the ecstasy that made us lost
The ends of these stories are hard to tell
And now be only compared to that of hell
And when they become incompatible
They forget they were once inseparable

But jittery do I feel day in and day out
To see a great fountain cease to function
And a respected monument burnt to ash
With no single artifact left for remembrance
In our visions we see
But we ignores because it wasn’t part our mission
To see our strongest citadel becomes weak
And even that of our voice become meek
The lit of our fire signaled fruition
But the current flames at the end symbolizes futility
Making the longest journey so far become fruitless
Difficult will it always be for we to say Ciao
Because our motives were greater than that
And never did we thought for this unexpected jilt
As we thought our candles that lighten the world will never melt
Our enemies will triumph and rejoice
As long as things continue to devastate
 And when nothing seems to circumscribe the situation
Their mood become blissful
For we will be left with nothing but to say goodbye
Yes goodbye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/10/2024 10:43:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/16/2016 1:33:00 PM
this is a deep write. LINDA
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