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Razor claws outstretched Grasping reaching for the heart As she destroys him Nathan Bane Leccese © All Rights Reserved 05/18/2009 *I left this open to see what the thoughts are on this one. I'm experimenting so let me know what you think.

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Date: 5/27/2009 8:52:00 AM
Eagle or symbol of feminine wonder ... the cosmos reek with plunder ... that poets make of sublime treasure ... to feed my mortal delight. Love it!
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Date: 5/22/2009 8:51:00 AM
Nice write Nathan, James
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Date: 5/21/2009 8:04:00 AM
INTRESTING WORK I LIKE IT
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Date: 5/20/2009 2:45:00 AM
Nice work, you are sailing the poetic sea with increcible writes...Raul
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Date: 5/19/2009 10:17:00 PM
Very sad but I enjoyed reading it. Short but full of messages. TY for your warm commnet of mine. Ernilando
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Date: 5/19/2009 6:31:00 AM
Some women can be so cruel. Nice work. Sad story. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/18/2009 9:37:00 AM
solid, vivid emotion! 3-great lines of senryu! Nathan! write-on!!! Jim
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Date: 5/18/2009 8:48:00 AM
She has her fangs in his heart..He has let her get very close and she has decided to use him and then spit him out..strong images my friend...I love this write.
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