Nathan Leccese Poet Senryu

Relationship

Razor claws outstretched 
Grasping reaching for the heart 
As she destroys him

Nathan Bane Leccese
© All Rights Reserved 05/18/2009







*I left this open to see what the thoughts are on this one. I'm experimenting so
let me know what you think.

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L'Nass Shango May 27, 2009 at 8:52 AM Eagle or symbol of feminine wonder ... the cosmos reek with plunder ... that poets make of sublime treasure ... to feed my mortal delight. Love it!

James Fraser May 22, 2009 at 8:51 AM Nice write Nathan, James

Brandy Megens May 21, 2009 at 8:04 AM INTRESTING WORK I LIKE IT

Raul Moreno May 20, 2009 at 2:45 AM Nice work, you are sailing the poetic sea with increcible writes...Raul

Ernilando Tugaff May 19, 2009 at 10:17 PM Very sad but I enjoyed reading it. Short but full of messages. TY for your warm commnet of mine. Ernilando

Sharon Winter May 19, 2009 at 6:31 AM Some women can be so cruel. Nice work. Sad story. Love, Shar

James Marshall Goff May 18, 2009 at 9:37 AM solid, vivid emotion! 3-great lines of senryu! Nathan! write-on!!! Jim

Christopher Higgins May 18, 2009 at 8:48 AM She has her fangs in his heart..He has let her get very close and she has decided to use him and then spit him out..strong images my friend...I love this write.