Rekindled

Hope has no direction when the deed has spoken its flower's doom
Set free from truths rejection to help our hearts reform
But ever so quietly reminiscent of the roses constant bloom
My heart still feels those times spent in the warmth reborn



October 10, 2020

4-line stanza excerpt from Tone of the Rose, April 2020

Rithimus Divisa 9 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Gregory Barden

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/12/2020 12:37:00 PM
A wonderfully deep write Lonna, such a worthy winner in Greg's contest!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/12/2020 3:57:00 PM
John, Thank you so very much for your very kind words and appreciation!
Date: 10/12/2020 10:08:00 AM
Thought these delicately written, flowing lines might be found on the winners podium, Lonna. Have read it several times. So happy for you! Congratulations!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/12/2020 3:52:00 PM
I am a true winner when my poems are read by someone like you!
Date: 10/12/2020 8:50:00 AM
Your deep imagery inspires my heart, Lonna. Profound beauty spills with ease from your gifted pen, my dear friend. Congratulations for your excellent win with this exceptional piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/12/2020 8:55:00 AM
Gosh Susan...you are always there with such warm and wonderful comments. Thank you for being who you are!
Date: 10/12/2020 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Gregory's competition Lonna. I always approach reading the winners' list in these specific competitions in the same way; I read your 4 line stanza and then read your original - and then read your 4 line stanza again. Both your pieces stand alone. Both made me think and both are rich in imagery and feeling.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/12/2020 8:54:00 AM
Thank you Gary.....read some of your poetry for the first time and WOW! Love how your think! Started following you too
Date: 10/12/2020 4:25:00 AM
Such a beautiful write with wonderful imagery, Lonna - congratulations, and thanks for taking the time to enter my Rithimus Divisa 9 contest. Blessings! :o) <3
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/12/2020 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Gregory for the wonderful comments and all that you do!
Date: 10/11/2020 11:07:00 AM
Your selection for Gregory's contest has so much to ponder about the depth and effects of hope on us. I really enjoyed it. Best wishes for the contest.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/11/2020 8:54:00 PM
Hi Sam, thank you so very much for your wonderful comments. Much appreciation!
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