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Write Five Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Written 3/13/2025

Rejuvenating Autumn Walk

Gently does the westerly wind touch my face. A loving maternal caress that does trace The space that does thread round with each walking pace. Reviving the flower within that I am With grace, in an unblemished vase, called grandam.
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Thomas Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 8:27 AM
Well you succeeded in writing five beautiful lines Eve :) How are you and the Grandson?
Roper Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 2:05 PM
Hello sweetie, thank you so much for your visit. I’ve not been on soup for a while. Just not been enthused in writing but thank you for your encouraging words. My grandson is doing well, he’s still struggling with his autism, but he’s gorgeous.
Dutta Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 7:01 AM
Excellent . Congrats to win on your beautiful poem. Love and Regards
Godwin Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 4:15 PM
Grandam? Is that what grandchildren call you, do you have grandchildren? I accepted long ago that I would never be a grandmother, but in late March I'm to be a step-granny, if you will, but I'm sure my step-daughter's real Mom won't give me much room. Your pen flowed with pure talent for this poem! I, too, have been trying to revive the flower that I am in memories prior to 9-24. I'm talking body, your talking internal. I lost a lot of muscle. Poetry Hugs ... CayCay
Healey Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 9:55 AM
Beautifully done, Eve. Congratulations.
Andresen Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 2:46 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful win poem, Eve :) - hugs
mysore Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 2:44 AM
beautiful. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 2:23 AM
Wonderful poem, dear Eve. You feel the sensations of emotions in your writing. and so do I. Best for a win. Hugs.
Rodgers Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 11:56 AM
Dear Eve, You beautifully and eloquently captured the essence of an autumnal stroll. I loved the gentle westerly wind you describe, which evoked a sense of maternal comfort, perfectly mirroring the nurturing aspect of nature. I felt the transformative power of nature in your words, showing how a simple walk can rejuvenate the spirit. I am a believer! Spring Blessings, my Dear Friend, Daniel
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