Rejuvenated

Rejuvenated 






All desires washed away 
The azure weeps
To dark night's illumine
Sobs subtle heart
Some reflections of past
Usurp my sleeps
As all life rests tranquil
For a fresh start !




Written August 21st, 2015
© Dr. Upma A. Sharma
For contest "visual of a verso" by Nette
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 3:27 PM
Lots of imagery in this one. Love the use of Usurp in your poem. It has been a long time I saw someone using that great word in a poem!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 8:02 AM
Deep thoughts wrapped in superb verse, Dr. Upma. A seven and good luck!
Deschler Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 12:26 AM
You've done a beautiful job with this contest entry, Dr. Upma. I really like your interpretation of those images... Good luck to you!
Nunez Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 5:58 AM
Hi Dr. Upma! I like the that that verso ends on a positive note despite the deeply sad beginning. hugs!
Allison Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 5:06 PM
beautiful interpretation of the visuals good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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