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Rejuvenated

Rejuvenated All desires washed away The azure weeps To dark night's illumine Sobs subtle heart Some reflections of past Usurp my sleeps As all life rests tranquil For a fresh start ! Written August 21st, 2015 © Dr. Upma A. Sharma For contest "visual of a verso" by Nette

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2015 3:27:00 PM

Lots of imagery in this one. Love the use of Usurp in your poem. It has been a long time I saw someone using that great word in a poem!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/24/2015 8:02:00 AM

Deep thoughts wrapped in superb verse, Dr. Upma. A seven and good luck!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/24/2015 12:26:00 AM

You've done a beautiful job with this contest entry, Dr. Upma. I really like your interpretation of those images... Good luck to you!

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/23/2015 5:58:00 AM

Hi Dr. Upma! I like the that that verso ends on a positive note despite the deeply sad beginning. hugs!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/21/2015 5:06:00 PM

beautiful interpretation of the visuals good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx