Rejection

Our childhood was selfish reign
did nothing but cause personal pain
our parents did naught for the self-worth gain
but ridiculed us into shame.

All our lives we tried to change
the internal dialogue negative was
rejection hounded like a savage dog
not able to let go of its forming fog.

We ran away to seek our fortunes
but self destruct was meant to be
life was hard, a test you see
the best wasn't meant to be.

The least we knew, but wanted more
why not settle the shameful score
because rejection sits at the core
keeping love outside the door.

I know the answer! Self-help books adorn
read with fever but left forlorn
happiness clouded as I now morn
left wishing I was never born.

Everything I've tried was to heal
this became my Achilles Heel.
The wheel of life, the circle done
I accept my lot, rejection won.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 10:51 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life.
A  Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 12:57 PM
WOW...THAT WAS DEEP....SKAT
Harris Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 1:20 PM
Wow! I totally get the emotion in that poem - Honest, gritty, vulnerable! Well done! Scott
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 11:47 PM
Such a sad yet beautiful poem Amanda. Congratulations and I hope to see you here more often.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 9:25 PM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Amanda! Great work!
A   Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 10:43 AM
Amanda, Congratulations, with your awesome rejection poem.... LOVE LINDA
Mehta Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 9:55 AM
Dropping again to congratulate you, Amanda
Grant Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 10:10 AM
Again, thank you Dr Ram.
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 6:43 AM
First of all congratulations on this beautifully written poem Amanda. I was torn apart reading it and was thinking how sad and yet realized what a great talent fate has produced. Welcome to the Soup.
Grant Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 10:08 AM
Brenda - thank you. I have only written two poems and they are in the last month. I am very new to poetry and don't yet understand all the different types, but thought I would try and write one. Your encouragement and kindness is greatly appreciated. All blessings to you.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 11:03 PM
I enjoyed your poem and want to congratulate you on a top win... Thank you so much for entering. Love and prayers and God bless you ~ Gina
Grant Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 3:47 AM
Gina, I am deeply grateful for your comment. This is only the second poem I have written. I so much appreciate you for giving me a top win.....With gratitude and all abundance, love Amanda.
Mehta Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 11:38 AM
Nice take on the theme of the contest, Amanda, Good luck
Grant Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 11:41 AM
Oh, thank you Dr Ram, you are the first person to make a comment on my poem. I am new, so happy to receive your comment. Amanda
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