Rejection

Girl professes love; boy runs bashfully
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 28, 2011 at 2:51 PM
Another little gem from you Caro!...
Horne Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 12:51 PM
A very insightful write, Carolyn. And a win in Sweetie's contest too! Yes, I once tried to send out congrats to everyone who'd won in each contest - and I was here for several hours. Phew! As you say, the pop ups slow things down and having to type in the characters on the Captcha thingy is seriously time consuming. So glad your eagle won - as you joked at the time, I'd love to see the result if it got together with my seagull LOL. I think my seagull materialised yesterday - 'splat' on my shoe!
Hilliker Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 8:22 PM
That's they way it happens so many times. Clever write.
Bulger Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 1:38 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!! :)
Winter Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 7:14 AM
congrats to you dear Carolyn on your win! and thank you so much for your kind congrats also, very sweet of you and sincerely appreciated. love, shar
Orschell Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 12:12 PM
Sweet poem, Carolyn. I love it. Congrats in the contest too. Love, Destiny
Fraser Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 5:14 PM
Sweet poem Carolyn, many congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest >> James
Brown Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 4:49 PM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "First Love" Carolyn. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 10:08 AM
Yeah, and man too! The older dat man get, the faster that suckah run. Great write, dear Carolyn. Love, Dave
Anderson Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations on your win, my friend..And thanks for your comments left for me...it does mean a lot...hugs, Jimmy
Chachere Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 11:41 PM
reminds of a guy i once knew.a while after, i did.he ran without a word. your poems explains this topic so well. good luck Carolyn. -Always&Forever Lynette
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 9:03 PM
Congratulations with yours, sweetie. I see it is just above mine on the list! Luv, Andrea
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April 23, 2010 at 8:13 PM
Congratulations on the win my friend,,this usually happens to me ,,only in reverse,,,happened alot in high school,,and thank you for all the wonderful wrods that you leave behind after reading mine,,,Blessings..Cecil
Haick Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 7:54 PM
Congratulations Carolyn!! This is one of my favs.! Love, Audrey
Sweetheart Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 5:14 PM
Congrats Carolyn on your success in my "First Love" contest with this lovely Epigram..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Kendrick Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 2:49 PM
Interesting write...He wasn't ready for any kind of relationship was he...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Richards Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 8:30 AM
I bet this has happened to young girls and boys everywhere! Oh dear....those painful first crushes!! :) Well done, Carolyn! Good luck!
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 7:58 AM
Good one, Carolyn!!!
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April 23, 2010 at 7:01 AM
Beautiful Carolyn ! I love the idea here ! james
Knop Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 5:41 AM
Hi, Carolyn! I have worked in Sri Lanka in the 1980ies and travelled also to Indonesia. Planting rice is a hard job for the women in these countries. I also like rice especially the Indian way. I use a lot of curry and spices in my cooking too. curcuma, which gives curry the yellow colour is a root (similar to ginger) and should be good to fight cancer....Wishing you a great weekend...Love, Gert
Knop Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 5:30 AM
Yes, Carolyn, English and German are quite close and the dialect spoken in the north of Germany is very similar to English and it's called "Platt". vicunas are a smaller species than lamas, more like alpacas, but even smaller. They are roaming wild in the Andean region. I lived in Chile for a few years and also in Antofagasta in the early 1960ies and visited the Atacama Desert quite often when working at the university. Have a great weekend..Love Gert
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April 23, 2010 at 4:49 AM
Cute one
Knop Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 4:08 AM
Short, but nicely written, Carolyn! Thank you for your kind comments! I will post my poems bi (or even tri) lingual on soup. Good luck for the contest and have a great weekend...Love, Gert
Kelly Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 3:48 AM
The first hot-blush of youth . Great short piece and best of luck , Calolyn in the contest ...
Valentine Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 2:44 AM
even though this was short and simple it was beautifully writen i get the point because its very straight forward good work hun :)
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