Rejected Heart

My heart wrote feelings
Once again I lost a love
Damn you Heart  Damn you

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/22/2011 8:16:00 PM

Excellent haiku. Always, Laura

John Freeman

Date: 10/28/2009 9:07:00 AM

A verse in the bible comes to me when I read this HG. (1 John 3:20) For if our heart condemn us, God is greater, than our hearts. An awesome Haiku. Sincerely, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2009 3:33:00 PM

And this my dear friend was a truly heartfelt write. Love, Carol

John Heck

Date: 12/27/2008 8:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your feature this week! Wishing you a Happy & Healthy New Year. Peace always, John

Daver Austin

Date: 12/27/2008 4:35:00 AM

I love haiku, and this one is super! Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 12/27/2008 2:56:00 AM

This is excellent. Heart is like that:) But atlast heart deserves a praise:) Loved it. Congratulations for a featured write. Have a great new year!! Love, Chitra

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 12/23/2008 5:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your haiku being featured. Vince

Amy Swanson

Date: 12/23/2008 4:54:00 PM

So touching and heartfelt, I thought it was beautiful. Congrats on getting featured this week! Happy Holidays and God bless, Amy :)

Brian Strand

Date: 12/22/2008 12:17:00 AM

Congrats on your feature this week HG.Rgds Brian

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/21/2008 10:33:00 PM

hook-up I would love to listen to some of the music that your friend played in please let me know how to find some of his work - You know fellow cool name member that was one of the best complements I have ever gotten - Thank you - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/21/2008 10:29:00 PM

HGarvey - Great Haiku - I just read your comment and I am very honored that you would compare me with your friend - Yea I watched my mother drown at age 4 and I have had a sever stutter ever since - Your comment touched me very deeply and of course you may call me Mike - Michaela Payne is a dear friend of mine - we talk both on and off the site as do Sharon Weimer and I she is the Sharon I wrote the poem about - I would love to talk with you via email "antoinette2332@sbcglobal.net" is my -