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A normal reindeer routine.

Reindeer

in the morn 
reindeer dine 
in corn fields 

afternoon 
reindeer lay 
a day nap 

late at night 
reindeer roam 
in moonlight


*example for my contest
  (3-3-3)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 6:15 PM
very nicely done, Charles.
Callus Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 2:22 PM
Your reindeer appear to have such a laidback serene life, Charles! Do I envy them! Regards // paul
Devonshire Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 11:47 AM
You've got that right!
La France Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Charlie, I like it and hope you like mine too !!!
Trifiatis Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 11:30 AM
Delightfully cheering dear, Charles
Roper Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 9:53 PM
Great imagery , Charles
Devonshire Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 5:43 PM
The freedom reindeer have to dine at their leisure, nap when they wish and (especially) to roam in moonlight is a pattern to be envied, Charlie. Great example for your contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Allison Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 5:18 PM
Hope I can comeupwith a poem for you Charlie, I do like your charlieku form:-) hugs Jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 3:47 PM
very uniquely done, charles... rudolf must be given extra vitamins... love this!..huggs
Messina Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 3:56 PM
He needs them..lol One night a year any way! Thank you, Nette Love & Hugs!
Warrior Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 3:10 PM
My dear friend...you truly are a frontiersman...you make things happen...I love everything you do...I am so proud...love & light...{*J*}...^WW^
Messina Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 3:51 PM
WW, first of all...thank you for that wonderful heartfelt Soup mail message. That was a beautiful thing! I too now know why god has sent me here :) Also, thank you again for your beautiful comments on this. Love & Light my dear friend (*J*) :) Charlie
Ashley Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 2:53 PM
My dear friend, Charlieku, your wonderful haiku is as soft and gentle as a doe's soulful eyes. Beautiful and peaceful imagery. Warmest wishes my very charming friend.. ~Susan
Messina Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 3:54 PM
I love the way you compared my haiku to a doe's eyes...it fits right in!! Thank you so much, Susan for you always so charming comments that always brings music to my ears. Warmest wishes and love & hugs my dear friend. ~Charlie
Cunningham Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Nice image Charlie, they work hard one day a year. Tom.
Devonshire Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 5:41 PM
And hardly work the other days, my friend :)
Messina Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 3:55 PM
Yes, they do...lol Thank you, Tom ~Charlie
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 10:31 AM
Lovely!
Messina Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 3:55 PM
Thank you, Mo!
Gauthier Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 9:41 AM
Love it, Charles.
Messina Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 3:55 PM
Thank you, Line! :)
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