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Reindeer

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A normal reindeer routine.

in the morn reindeer dine in corn fields afternoon reindeer lay a day nap late at night reindeer roam in moonlight *example for my contest (3-3-3)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2018 6:15:00 PM

very nicely done, Charles.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/8/2018 2:22:00 PM

Your reindeer appear to have such a laidback serene life, Charles! Do I envy them! Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/9/2018 11:47:00 AM

You've got that right!

Constance La France

Date: 12/8/2018 1:54:00 PM

Charlie, I like it and hope you like mine too !!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/7/2018 11:30:00 AM

Delightfully cheering dear, Charles

Eve Roper

Date: 12/6/2018 9:53:00 PM

Great imagery , Charles

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/6/2018 5:43:00 PM

The freedom reindeer have to dine at their leisure, nap when they wish and (especially) to roam in moonlight is a pattern to be envied, Charlie. Great example for your contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison

Date: 12/6/2018 5:18:00 PM

Hope I can comeupwith a poem for you Charlie, I do like your charlieku form:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/6/2018 3:47:00 PM

very uniquely done, charles... rudolf must be given extra vitamins... love this!..huggs

Charles Messina
Date: 12/6/2018 3:56:00 PM

He needs them..lol One night a year any way! Thank you, Nette Love & Hugs!

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/6/2018 3:10:00 PM

My dear friend...you truly are a frontiersman...you make things happen...I love everything you do...I am so proud...love & light...{*J*}...^WW^

Charles Messina
Date: 12/6/2018 3:51:00 PM

WW, first of all...thank you for that wonderful heartfelt Soup mail message. That was a beautiful thing! I too now know why god has sent me here :) Also, thank you again for your beautiful comments on this. Love & Light my dear friend (*J*) :) Charlie

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/6/2018 2:53:00 PM

My dear friend, Charlieku, your wonderful haiku is as soft and gentle as a doe's soulful eyes. Beautiful and peaceful imagery. Warmest wishes my very charming friend.. ~Susan

Charles Messina
Date: 12/6/2018 3:54:00 PM

I love the way you compared my haiku to a doe's eyes...it fits right in!! Thank you so much, Susan for you always so charming comments that always brings music to my ears. Warmest wishes and love & hugs my dear friend. ~Charlie