Bl Devnath Poet Rhyme

Regretting Cake

Oh! now regretting cake
                                hands are weak so can't bake
                                  time's gone memories run
                                 will come back the past fun?
                               Wow! hearts are young till now
                             sometimes compels to do any how
                            in dry weather there's no rain drops
                               of the two any one surely flops

                     
                           Written on: 09/08/2016
                           REGRETTING CAKE - Poetry Contest
                           Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Daniel Turner August 15, 2016 at 7:53 AM I do not bake anymore either. I buy them already baked. Like you, I would rather reminisce. Enjoyed reading you today, my friend. Bl Devnath August 15, 2016 at 12:09 PM Thanks my friend for your beautiful comment. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Lynn Marie August 14, 2016 at 3:57 PM Superbly written..it's amazing the loss one feels when physically unable to "bake a cake" as the bonding and sharing is so reminiscent of treasured times spent together. I love your interpretation, a pleasure to read.. my best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn Bl Devnath August 15, 2016 at 12:10 PM Thanks my friend for your beautiful comment. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2016 at 1:29 PM - It is many years since I bake a cake ...... - Wonderful written, it will give you a win in the contest :) - Good luck my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath August 14, 2016 at 1:38 PM Thanks for your support my lovely lovely friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl