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Regretting Cake

Oh! now regretting cake hands are weak so can't bake time's gone memories run will come back the past fun? Wow! hearts are young till now sometimes compels to do any how in dry weather there's no rain drops of the two any one surely flops Written on: 09/08/2016 REGRETTING CAKE - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Daniel Turner

Date: 8/15/2016 7:53:00 AM

I do not bake anymore either. I buy them already baked. Like you, I would rather reminisce. Enjoyed reading you today, my friend.

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/15/2016 12:09:00 PM

Thanks my friend for your beautiful comment. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/14/2016 3:57:00 PM

Superbly written..it's amazing the loss one feels when physically unable to "bake a cake" as the bonding and sharing is so reminiscent of treasured times spent together. I love your interpretation, a pleasure to read.. my best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/15/2016 12:10:00 PM

Thanks my friend for your beautiful comment. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/14/2016 1:29:00 PM

- It is many years since I bake a cake ...... - Wonderful written, it will give you a win in the contest :) - Good luck my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/14/2016 1:38:00 PM

Thanks for your support my lovely lovely friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl