Seren Roberts Poet Couplet

Regretting Cake

I ate that cake on my 100 birthday
choked on it, now for my soul you doth pray 

who put the nuts in, they should pay
for causing me to die, in this unhealthy way 

looking down at you, all I can say.....is
thank goodness at last, I got away.


penned August 10 2016

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Teddy Kimathi August 15, 2016 at 8:01 AM Congrats Seren, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Wendy Rycroft August 15, 2016 at 1:52 AM Congrats well done x

Sandra Haight August 14, 2016 at 9:28 PM Very clever and made me smile, Seren. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra Seren Roberts August 15, 2016 at 12:40 AM Thanks Sandra, ...Seren

Kim Rodrigues August 14, 2016 at 3:20 PM Congratulations! Seren Roberts August 15, 2016 at 12:41 AM Hi Kim thanks for commenting......Seren

Beautiful Scars August 14, 2016 at 2:53 PM Seren, congrats on your placement with this very cute poem! :)-luloo Seren Roberts August 15, 2016 at 12:43 AM lol Thanks Laura was just a fun piece....Seren

Tom Arnone August 14, 2016 at 2:41 PM You're complaining at 100! -- and, how old is he?! Congrats on your placement. ;-) Seren Roberts August 15, 2016 at 12:46 AM old and past it too i guess.... Haha Tom i enjoyed writing the nonsense......Seren

Arthur Vaso August 11, 2016 at 10:03 PM Hey you cant be murdered twice!!!!! Great write! Seren Roberts August 15, 2016 at 12:50 AM you cant keep a good girl down............Seren

Jan Allison August 11, 2016 at 2:33 AM Sure made me smile Seren a unique take on the contest - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx Seren Roberts August 15, 2016 at 12:47 AM thank you Jan.....Seren

CayCay Godwin August 11, 2016 at 12:58 AM I absolutely love it! Cheers, applause - great laugh (I could hear it) ... CayCay Seren Roberts August 11, 2016 at 1:09 AM Thanks CayCay glad you laughed, hmm was it you?? Lol Seren