Regretting Cake

The cake I regret is the one I ate on our wedding day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Mills  Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 12:57 PM
That takes the cake!
Murray Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 1:13 PM
AND the biscuit Susannah!!
Turner Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 9:26 PM
No regrets, Jean! You should have smeared some in his face.
Murray Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 5:04 AM
That's my Mum peeking out behing him Daniel. I might still be married to him if she had not advised me six years ago to split. That very night I kicked him out. She was dead from malignant melonoma three months later. I consider her advice her parting gift to me.
Vaso Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 7:59 PM
Its sad when the cake lasts longer than the love! :)
Murray Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 5:07 AM
True.
Vaso Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 7:58 PM
Now thats good I wasn't expecting that line!
Murray Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 5:08 AM
Happy to surprise you Arthur. Thank you for your visit. Viv ate the last crumbs I'm afraid.
Wigley Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 7:21 PM
Crumbs.... x
Murray Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 7:55 PM
All gone. Sorty Viv.
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