Regret

Can you hear the sound

     a voice calling out to you

        whispers of times gone

            a could have should have would have

                  regret is a lonely tune...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Yamin Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 10:36 AM
An awesome write Sharon -thought provoking poem. Welcome to PoetreySoup as a life member. -Mohammad
Robakidze Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 7:08 AM
Exellent .:)
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 11:37 PM
This is the second tanka I read today about regret. It makes me wonder if there is a contest about regret or maybe someone was inspired by this lovely one!!!
Ruebel Avatar
March 20, 2012 at 3:52 PM
Hello Andrea, Hope you are well and doing fine. I have been away awhile. Glad you liked this one. I am going to try to get up here as much as I can this year. Love to you dear friend and poet....Shar
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March 17, 2012 at 6:22 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem, Sharon. Great Tanka. Love, Kim
Ruebel Avatar
March 20, 2012 at 3:53 PM
Hello Kim, Thank you for reading me and for your very nice comments. I am glad you liked it, feel free to visit again...Lov, Shar
A   Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 3:20 PM
Sharon, a very deep... Wish... On taking back.. ..happy st. Paddy day ~ always*PD
Ruebel Avatar
March 20, 2012 at 3:54 PM
Thank you Destroyer Poet! Love to you honey, hope all is well with you. Thank you for reading me and I hope to be up here often this year. Love, Shar
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