Get Your Premium Membership

Regret

On weary ground I walk and think Of you; your shadow follows everywhere I go and feckless as the saline tears That flow, I’m hollow. Memories, impressions thus ensue A measured dose that slowly dribbles Through; like intravenous drips that Bring in pain, I see the poison coursing Through my veins. Regret’s a stinking feeling to endure It leaves the heart there aching insecure A pallid soul, laconic, dry and dead And nothing to the past can ere be said. On weary ground I walk and think of you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/10/2010 8:36:00 PM
Can relate very well with this. The feelings are very well described. But regret is also a bit like fog; let the sunshine in, it will dissipate. As long as there is life, there will be new possibilities and new opportunities. Thanks for sharing, David and thank you for your comments on my latest. Take care, Caroline.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/5/2010 7:49:00 AM
Sad, but written in nice words, David! Thank you for your comments...Gert
Login to Reply
Date: 5/5/2010 5:11:00 AM
How well you describe the sinking feeling we have when we live with regret, David. This one goes to my favorites. Awesome! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 5/5/2010 5:05:00 AM
so sad, nicely written!!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/5/2010 3:33:00 AM
Regrets are a hard pills to swallow..Hope that it is just a topic and not your life...If your life, apologize..a genuine apology..forgive yourself and move on...don't wallow in the regret..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things