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Regret

time’s sands swirl
the spinners spin, our marionette lines
twisting and entwined
caught upon each other’s lives

loss now stains my mottled 
once proud face, scaffolding 
slack and slipping ever downward 
with fogged eyes failing in their folds

summer’s sun a distant memory
and winter’s icy doorway within reach;
so much I should have said, but
words failed, falling stillborn from my lips

immedicable wounds now fester, layered 
scars purple and puckered accuse
as I hum some dreary dirge 
to the beating wings of carrion birds

no refuge anymore for the damned
time a long way passed such redemption
I stand staring at that frozen hole
muttering prayers in an angry landscape

.. goodbye old friend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Perna Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 1:37 PM
Nicely written. I can relate!
Whitnell Avatar
January 27, 2023 at 3:24 PM
This poem is dedicated to my sister, who died suddenly, and at a time when we’d not spoken in a while … something I will always regret!
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