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Regarding Mirrors, a Short Poem

Regarding Mirrors , a short poem I cannot walk, so do not pass them. Me unseen. Only my iPad turns this way, But apparently doesn’t want to. Me staying unseen. My inner mirror I do Not let lean green; l keep It held in a year long gone by With no gray hair and feeling The sparkle in my eyes still bright. Me seen Going on in happy memory. ————————————————————- (c sally young eslinger 2/21/22

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Date: 4/22/2022 12:17:00 AM
Sally, This is a most unusual poem, concise, challenging with lines that segue effortlessly. My poem “Sensual Loss Sensual Gain” which you liked has been awarded a first place medal in a poetry soup contest. Thanks for everything Howard
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Date: 2/27/2022 6:37:00 AM
Love it Sally Complex , brooding , intense Honest. Cheers enjoyed reading ta
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 2/27/2022 3:22:00 PM
Sally I read in 1 of your kind comment's you placed. You we're in a Coma. I wrote a poem myself early on when I began called Code Coma . I myself have never been in a Coma I find it fascinating though. The poem I wrote was more a way of trying to imagine how puzzling it must be. If you have the time please will you read it Sally. Thank you Cheers try and
Date: 2/27/2022 6:36:00 AM
Love it Sally Complex , brooding , intense Honest. Cheers enjoyed reading ta
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