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The One Flower That Practically Guarantees Hummingbird Visits

Regal Bird Regales

End Line Rhyme as a                        Footle 
What compels every life to be         alive
It is best to feed themselves to          survive
Sunlight and water nurture the             flower
Enough to sustain and give it                 power
Like the winged bird that flaps while         humming
Some saw it as an expected                    coming
And as it thrust its long beak                      sweetly
slurps while wings flap swift and holding       deeply
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George Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 7:15 PM
Hi William, this is so ingeniously done and so beautiful. Enjoyed its essence and its lay out.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 7:28 PM
Thank you, my friend, Aloha.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:49 PM
amazing construction left me in awe....such appreciation for my favorite--the hummingbird.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 7:25 PM
Thank you, my friend, Aloha.
Narain Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 10:13 AM
Nicely penned.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 10:25 AM
Thank you, my friend, Aloha.
Hind Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 9:12 AM
Very pretty!!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 10:24 AM
Thank you, my friend, Aloha.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 1:46 AM
Hi, a subtle poem, so well-crafted.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:26 AM
Thank you, my friend, Aloha.
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