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Refuge Among Parasols

Curtains of parasols hide the sky from an outer world to guard the lit splendor of dusk undone, where ferris wheels roll in a time restricted by structured hours. Cotton candy puffs mid-air for at least a longer moment, when children in Sunday frocks escape into a thrill of magic, dreaming of a refuge from things mundane. The colored umbrellas burst into firework parade Above a welcoming air swaying on handles lit by conniving stars; the ringmaster boasts of circus' finale prompting the fat lady to dance an encore--- a mimic of play sheltering giggles for extended tweets before undue slumber. Symbolism: The Umbrella Contest from Leon Datu Feb 23, 2014 #4

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Date: 3/7/2014 11:49:00 PM
Leon, great little poem here, congrats!
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Date: 3/7/2014 9:20:00 PM
This truly deserved the win,congrats Leon.
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Date: 3/7/2014 4:50:00 AM
Nice take on the theme of the poem, congrats on the win, leon
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Date: 3/7/2014 3:03:00 AM
- "THE UMBRELLA" Contest (by: Nette Onclaud) for the imagination - Congratulations on your winning poem, Leon ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2014 8:54:00 AM
thank you, leon!.. huggs
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