Refuge Among Parasols

Curtains of parasols hide the sky
from an outer world to guard
the lit splendor of dusk undone,
where ferris wheels roll
in a time restricted by structured hours.

Cotton candy puffs mid-air
for at least a longer moment,
when children in Sunday frocks
escape into a thrill of magic,
dreaming of a refuge from things mundane.

The colored umbrellas burst into firework parade
Above a welcoming air 
swaying on handles lit by conniving stars;
the ringmaster boasts of circus' finale
prompting the fat lady to dance an encore---
a mimic of play sheltering giggles 
for extended tweets before undue slumber.


Symbolism: The Umbrella Contest
from Leon Datu
Feb 23, 2014
#4
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kayode Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:20 PM
This truly deserved the win,congrats Leon.
Mehta Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 4:50 AM
Nice take on the theme of the poem, congrats on the win, leon
Andresen Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 3:03 AM
- "THE UMBRELLA" Contest (by: Nette Onclaud) for the imagination - Congratulations on your winning poem, Leon ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 8:54 AM
thank you, leon!.. huggs
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