Notes About The Poem

"Cause me to hear Thy loving kindness in the morning; for in Thee do I trust: cause me to know the way wherein I should walk; for I lift up my soul unto Thee." - Psalm 143:8 (KJV)

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A Sam Scott poem:
5th December 2024
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Refreshing

Sometimes the dry desert wind
Strips slowly the sandless skin
Of the soul 

Gentle balm of the wide Spirit
Settling upon the surface 
Singing a song of suppleness 

Message of the mindful reflection 
From the internal mirror 
Of the heart

Home to the fruitful Spirit
Residence of the restoring, loving kindness
Of the refreshing riverside

Where solace comes, pacifying
With the sounds trickling and dancing
Over cool stones of thought
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Slaughter Avatar
January 4, 2025 at 10:07 AM
Growing up in the West Texas desert, as I did, the first stanza here really resonates with me. This piece really reflects your "wide" and "fruitful" Spirit, Sam.
Scott Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 12:14 PM
The desert is an intriguing wilderness and a cruel mistress of extremes. Thank you for your insight and kindness, Jim. Blessings, Sx :)
Poet Avatar
December 29, 2024 at 3:13 PM
Hey Sam, this verse is truly remarkable for its exquisite contemplation of resiliency and resuscitation. I really enjoy this poem because it has a calming and stimulating tone. It deserves a higher spot in the top 100. Sam, I appreciate your comments.
Scott Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 7:20 PM
Sotto a comment from you is worth a thousand placings my friend. You did well and thank you blessing to you for the new year Sx :)
Williams Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 3:05 AM
Oh and of course without a doubt ,beautifully narrated ...Hugs
Scott Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 4:59 AM
You are a blessing x
Williams Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 3:04 AM
Dear Sam, your poem is a beautiful reflection on resilience and renewal. The imagery of the "dry desert wind" paired with the "gentle balm of the wide Spirit" paints a vivid contrast between struggle and solace. A truly soothing and inspiring poem, a fave for me...Hugs
Scott Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 5:02 AM
Maria, as always I am grateful and humbled by your comments, so, thank you x hugs back, ofcourse Sx
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