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Such history recorded in antique wool; A knit of generational saga Hand-woven through matriarchs’ tales-- Creating a patch of triumph and fault. Now, this mantle lays on the bedside, In antique wool, I inherit my elders' legacy. For nette onclaud---The Best of 6 Contest June 6, 2016 Visual 2

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Date: 6/8/2016 3:21:00 PM
Congrats Jajosh, on your placement with this lovely piece!! ;-)
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Date: 6/8/2016 10:54:00 AM
Beautiful poem read from you my lovely friend. Congrats on your win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/7/2016 1:36:00 AM
Congratulations. Opens a whole new perspective to my wife's crocheting.
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:59:00 PM
Great layers in this fine poem! Congrats on your win, Jajosh :)
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:42:00 PM
Many congrats JaJosh I like your interpretation of the image:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:34:00 PM
You packed a lot of poetic meaning into 6 lines. I like your poem and congratulate you on your win. CayCay
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Date: 6/6/2016 4:08:00 PM
jajosh, yes you traced an era's story through a wonderful tapestry of a poem.. congrats on your high award.. huggs
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