Jared Pickett Poet Free verse

Refrain

Insane,
deranged,
when high on cane.
I must refrain
from corrupting my brain.
Like this..
I have a lisp,
drunk and I miss,
My Latin barbie doll.

I feel small
insignificant and all,
a pea sized rain drop,
solo I fall...
I pick up my cell phone
call thy booty call.
only to stall,
my heart-ache.


Jared Pickett
11/17/09
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Richard Pickett December 22, 2009 at 5:29 AM Latin Barbie doll,, Meaning Consuelo? Nicely written...Gotta love those booty calls....Dad

Caroline Cécile Delacroix November 21, 2009 at 8:43 PM This write to me describes with interesting words, not too easy to understand, but evoking a profound inner struggle. I really appreciate the writing itself with the great rhyming. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comment on my poem. Caroline.

Rachel Sullivan November 20, 2009 at 11:48 PM wow I love this great job

Sara Kendrick November 19, 2009 at 7:23 AM Interesting thoughts put to pen. Very creative. Keep writing. Sara

Raul Moreno November 19, 2009 at 12:07 AM You have a way with words, nice work...Raul

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 17, 2009 at 3:25 PM I hear u.. Jared ... great write and wonderful play on words.. exciting to read... thankxxx for your many lovely comments on my poetry today.. happy u enjoyed and will keep on going as long as everyone wants to keep on reading.. I so enjoy your poetry too... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart" Jared, where are u from?

Charmaine Chircop November 17, 2009 at 2:06 PM Hearfelt..describe sad ,thrist emotion so well,i can relate..yet Jared..continue walking,never stop till you reach"the rainbow"--:)Charma

Anthony Nutter November 17, 2009 at 10:44 AM Hits hard, excellent write. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Carol Sunshine Brown November 17, 2009 at 10:16 AM Thank you for starting my week out with some excellent reading Jared. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse November 17, 2009 at 8:58 AM feel the pain here, good expressions,

John Freeman November 17, 2009 at 8:34 AM Expression of pain, vivid and real, in this write Jared, Good Job, Sincerely, Moses

Lena Townsend November 17, 2009 at 6:22 AM An emotional write. You express the pain so well. The words truly touch the reader. Well done. Peace, love and light be with you always. Smiles from Lolita