Refrain

Insane, deranged, when high on cane. I must refrain from corrupting my brain. Like this.. I have a lisp, drunk and I miss, My Latin barbie doll. I feel small insignificant and all, a pea sized rain drop, solo I fall... I pick up my cell phone call thy booty call. only to stall, my heart-ache. Jared Pickett 11/17/09 Asavvy1

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Richard Pickett

Date: 12/22/2009 5:29:00 AM

Latin Barbie doll,, Meaning Consuelo? Nicely written...Gotta love those booty calls....Dad

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/21/2009 8:43:00 PM

This write to me describes with interesting words, not too easy to understand, but evoking a profound inner struggle. I really appreciate the writing itself with the great rhyming. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comment on my poem. Caroline.

Rachel Sullivan

Date: 11/20/2009 11:48:00 PM

wow I love this great job

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/19/2009 7:23:00 AM

Interesting thoughts put to pen. Very creative. Keep writing. Sara

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/19/2009 12:07:00 AM

You have a way with words, nice work...Raul

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/17/2009 3:25:00 PM

I hear u.. Jared ... great write and wonderful play on words.. exciting to read... thankxxx for your many lovely comments on my poetry today.. happy u enjoyed and will keep on going as long as everyone wants to keep on reading.. I so enjoy your poetry too... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart" Jared, where are u from?

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/17/2009 2:06:00 PM

Hearfelt..describe sad ,thrist emotion so well,i can relate..yet Jared..continue walking,never stop till you reach"the rainbow"--:)Charma

Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/17/2009 10:44:00 AM

Hits hard, excellent write. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/17/2009 10:16:00 AM

Thank you for starting my week out with some excellent reading Jared. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/17/2009 8:58:00 AM

feel the pain here, good expressions,

John Freeman

Date: 11/17/2009 8:34:00 AM

Expression of pain, vivid and real, in this write Jared, Good Job, Sincerely, Moses

Lena Townsend

Date: 11/17/2009 6:22:00 AM

An emotional write. You express the pain so well. The words truly touch the reader. Well done. Peace, love and light be with you always. Smiles from Lolita