Reflex Reactions

What activates my reflex arc
And causes me to shiver?
Which stimuli come into play
To set my nerves aquiver?

At home alone at dead of night
A creak will make me skittish.
My lower lip begins to drop
In fashion quite un-British! *

And should I inadvertently
Whilst in the garden walking,
Be tickled by a spider's web
The shock will leave me balking.

Don't mention snakes and darting bats
Obnoxious smells and vermin,
Or scraping sound as chalk meets board,
For all will leave me squirming.

In other matters I am bold;
No lily-livered chicken.
But when sheer instinct rules the roost
It leaves my senses stricken.

* in contrast to the traditional British 'stiff upper lip'

08.06.19

'What makes you flinch poetry contest'
Sponsored by Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 6/16/2019 3:36:00 PM
Hi Wendy: You summed up the word flinch with your cleverly worded poem. Bravo!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 6/16/2019 4:10:00 PM
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and give kind feedback,Ralph.
Date: 6/12/2019 1:26:00 PM
Hi Wendy, Your writing style is remarkable. I loved this. Well done. Panagiota Romios
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Date: 6/16/2019 4:07:00 PM
Thank you for such an encouraging comment, Panagiota. I sound like such a wimp, don't I ?!
Date: 6/11/2019 3:20:00 PM
Love it Wendy - my sort of style. Humor with pathos. Well done.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 6/12/2019 12:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading and giving this encouraging feedback,Robert.
Date: 6/10/2019 9:33:00 AM
That is very funny. Good luck in the contest.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 6/12/2019 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Kai. I'm glad it raised a smile!
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